Our Family Dinner
Yesterday we had a family dinner but some people came late. This was because they live a long way away from us. There was my Auntie Curlie, my Auntie Vanessa, my cousins Caleb and Nevea, and my Dad. My other cousin came but I don't know his name. So I call him baby. We had chips, bacon, some chicken, some fish and crab. We all sat at the dinner table. Later we had strawberry cake, strawberries, chocolate ice-cream , strawberry ice-cream and all the flavours.
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